could we, maybe be just fine ?!?

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    could we, maybe be just fine ?!?

     Why must we cause pain to others

    Without knowing whos to blame

    We sit and wait in shame

    We lift ourselfs up

    While putting ourselfs down

    We get confused so much

    Lets just call on his name

    Trust in his power

    Belive in his word

    And maybe just maybe we will be just fine

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    featherscribe commented on could we, maybe be just fine ?!?

    07-18-2009

    Your poetry is God's assistant. Your questions and observations compell the reader to face real life problems and issues which get ignored too often. You doing His work is what is known as Agape.
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    ahardwalk

    07/18/2009

    thank you for commenting your encouragement means a lot to me!!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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