When we Relize

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    When we Relize

     At times we might want to give in
    At times we may want to give up
    We may say I just dont care anymore
    Are want everyone to leave you alone
    We may feel as if nobody else could ever understand
    Maybe we say some words that shouldnt have been said
    We may hate it when others try to help
                         But
    We are still here
    We are still standing
    We havent gave up
    We havent gave in
    We will make it
    We will pull through
                          Because
    Your not alone
    You do need help
    Not everyone is out to get you
    Not everyone is that person
    We all need that person to tell us what we dont want to hear but need to hear
                          In the end
    Everyone needs a hand
    Everyone needs a slap till they wake up
    Everyone needs Everyone!

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    gregster commented on When we Relize

    11-30-2010

    i guess your right on this one..and truth is you said it boldly and it awesome.we do need eachother.great job
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    ahardwalk

    11/30/2010

    Thanks!!!

    carmentis commented on When we Relize

    07-19-2009

    thats true we all require some assistance but in thoughts that transeced the one of best friends you will ever have is the very one that will tell you in the end your not worth giveing up on nor are you worth quiting and keeps a distant to let you fall and gives you a hand to get up when your down.i hope everyone can find on of these
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    ahardwalk

    11/27/2010

    I hope so too! Thanks for your comment!!!

    featherscribe commented on When we Relize

    07-18-2009

    You are loved. You are cared for. You are a wonderful helper for your peers. You inspire many! Thank you for writing poetry.
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    ahardwalk

    07/18/2009

    wow!! that was really nice thanks!! thats always nice to hear :D

    edgee commented on When we Relize

    07-07-2009

    I think this poem shows heart and sould poured in and i think that you, at the age you are, would be going thru alot and you need a shoulder to lean on but the poetry is on point and so many people need to read this.....you have the gift so dont let it pass yo by....look forward to checking out more of your work.....
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    ahardwalk

    07/10/2009

    wow thanks!! I never really thought i had a talent to write i just enjoy it so why not... but honestly thanks that was very nice to hear!!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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