Questions that surround

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    Questions that surround
    What lies beneath?
    When nobody is watching?
    Do you stay the same or change?
    When you think you have nobody were do you go?
    When life seems misreble what do you do?
    Do you take it out on the one you love?
    Do you say fuck it and think of them despite what your going through?
    What should love be?
    When does love lie within you?
    Should we let love fly are just let love die?
    When they think your perfect and you know your not how do you react?
    Should life be this hard?
    Would it work if it was easy?
    If I cant bear to hold on who will be there to hold me?
    When you just want a hug and thats it who will be there?


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    BlaQReign commented on Questions that surround

    12-01-2009

    Alot of questions, that only life can answer. Love isn't pain...Featherscribe, gave an excellent definition...BlaQ Reign
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    ahardwalk

    12/09/2009

    thanks for your comment

    carmentis commented on Questions that surround

    07-19-2009

    there is none better then i can say the when you consider this small task thus forth, you can not control the next breath you take nor the next beat of your heart, these are the things not in your control anything else is still in your hands,
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    featherscribe commented on Questions that surround

    07-18-2009

    What love should be? Here is a partial answer: love is that which assists, acts, builds,bestows, cares, calms, donates, expresses, feeds, fulfills, grows, gives, heals, honors, instills, illuminates, justifies, knows, kneels, lives, lends, mends, makes, notes, nurtures, offers, organizes, protects, prepares, quotes, questions, recognizes, remembers, seeks, saves, teaches, travels, urges, utilizes, volunteers, vouches, washes, waits, yields. Love is patient, kind, gentle, generous, forgiving. Love endures forever. Many of your questions may be answered with the above information.
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    ahardwalk

    07/18/2009

    wow thats the best explanation i have ever gotten i will always remember this thanks a bunch!

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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