Cry! the morning dove-

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Cry! the morning dove-

Cry! the morning dove-

not even first light wrests me

like your lover's song.

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danmartyjake1 commented on Cry! the morning dove-

02-23-2011

This one is interesting. I get my own images and thoughts from my memories past coming up when I read it.

aw3haiku

02/23/2011

taking that as a compliment. It is difficult to convey the image of the depth of feeling of the moment, so thanks for the validation.

sanctus commented on Cry! the morning dove-

02-22-2011

nice, short and compelling................................

aw3haiku

02/22/2011

Thanks sanctus.

RHPeat commented on Cry! the morning dove-

02-14-2011

A depth of feeling awakens. Nicely done. A poet friend//RH Peat

aw3haiku

02/14/2011

Thanks again, RH

Helios commented on Cry! the morning dove-

02-12-2011

I must say, it has been awhile since I have read a well written piece that is short yet poetically admirable. I must aak you if you have written any longer works Amos because I cannot imagine such energu going into just the haiku form. A beautiful and charming piece.

aw3haiku

02/13/2011

Helios- imagine. . . thank you for the compliment. I write just haiku. the intensity is there in a breath, and felt in a blow. What is left is a respiration of another's reality wrapped around the reader's heart; just as it was around the poet's. they (haiku) are draining when the totality of "the moment" is realized/articulated whilst penning.

Helios

02/13/2011

I response you have given is one of the beauty of the world captured in a stroke of a pen. No form of poetry can replace the goal of a poet to achieve unity with the sublime.

gmcookie commented on Cry! the morning dove-

02-12-2011

Ah yes, that song that seems at first part of our dream and fades with our unconsciousness. The bridge between two worlds. Another 10 Amos...

aw3haiku

02/13/2011

Thanks, cookie. .......................................................

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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