Dancing With...?

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    Dancing With...?
    Engage with me in this morbid dance
    Let our feet glide, untrembeling,
    Over the broken glass
    We so willingly smashed
    On this perfect floor
    Let our hands be gracefully bound
    By the razor wire we protected
    Our unblemished flesh with
    Step with me as I lead you into
    Nowhere
    Follow my touch as it feels without
    Trust
    Close your eyes as I blindly
    Carry on
    Smell my sweet breath
    That tastes like a dead
    Rose
    Kiss my soft lips
    And betray this final dance
    As you leave me here holding nothing
    But a decaying bride in an empty dress

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    passionsdance commented on Dancing With...?

    06-28-2009

    Lost love eh ? I loved this one . Reminds me of many relationships. I loved the metaphore and WOW .... You certainly have a way with wods.
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    Dusty commented on Dancing With...?

    01-29-2009

    Very intense. I tried to rate this one up. It deserves more then an 8!
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    erriczhade

    06/28/2009

    sorry I haven't been on earlier to thank you for reading and enjoying my writing. it really does make me feel like I can make a difference in this horribly cruel world.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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