Dark Night

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Poem was written during dark moments in my life.  Involved in an abusive relationship and losing hope that men could see their way to do the right thing let alone do it. 

Dark Night

Day turns to night
The Sun turning away his self
Man does what he thinks is right
putting his soul on a shelf

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NekodaGirl commented on Dark Night

06-23-2009

Its short, but holds so much meaning! It makes me think...thank you for sharing

jeani1971

06/23/2009

I was afraid to share. Thank you.

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