DAWNS FIRST LIGHT ~

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    • is trying not to drown in her own sorrow

    DAWNS FIRST LIGHT ~

     dawns frist ligh,gives away to the golden
    mist in these 1st hours of the moring when
    the whole world is still time its self seems to stand
    still for you world with open eyes before your day
    beings and the light of noon comes to remind you
    of the thing you have to do and some where eles
    is seeing the self with it golden ligth deming to nite fall.

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    SuperChick76 commented on DAWNS FIRST LIGHT ~

    04-21-2010

    A beautifully painted image, the flow was very nice. A typo or two, but no big deal. It was very nicely written. Good job. =D
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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