DAWNS FIRST LIGHT ~

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  • selena
  • is trying not to drown in her own sorrow

DAWNS FIRST LIGHT ~

dawns frist ligh,gives away to the golden
mist in these 1st hours of the moring when
the whole world is still time its self seems to stand
still for you world with open eyes before your day
beings and the light of noon comes to remind you
of the thing you have to do and some where eles
is seeing the self with it golden ligth deming to nite fall.

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SuperChick76 commented on DAWNS FIRST LIGHT ~

04-21-2010

A beautifully painted image, the flow was very nice. A typo or two, but no big deal. It was very nicely written. Good job. =D

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

selena’s Poems (16)

Title Comments
Title Comments
i love you ,an i hate you 2
i miss you ! 5
I'll fadeed twilight 7
Rain & Thunder 8
LOVE KILLS SLOWLY ~ 4
DAWNS FIRST LIGHT ~ 1
a summers brezz~ 3
half hearted~ 1
Bleeding sorrow 5
we are the watcher of time 6
sorrow 4
you do not know me 2
"And I became torn.my heart was shattered as well" 2
all this i hate about myself 3
the mask 8
Unsecured of what lies beyond the deep abyss, 5