we are the watcher of time

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    • is trying not to drown in her own sorrow

    we are the watcher of time

    we are the watchers of time
    Command the Silent witness to break before the dawn
    the stars casting light amung us like silent sentinals we watch
    always bearing witness to the most beautiful
    to the most destructive powers of their storm

    We marvel in creation and wish they knew
    how long that creation would stand to
    we walk amung the living
    we wave goodbye to all the dead

    Its here we are placed between the realms
    its here right at the veil
    the wall between the living
    the wall between the dead

    we live here as both
    limbo in some sence of ways
    to always watch
    the hello
    and goodbyes

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    gregster commented on we are the watcher of time

    05-22-2010

    all the days go by .......and this poem here says a lot.i really appreciate your writing nice one
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    Musicmynded1 commented on we are the watcher of time

    04-20-2010

    I like this one Selena, sounds like they can be lyrics to a song.. which is my cup of tea.. good writing.
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    Artie commented on we are the watcher of time

    01-10-2010

    Nice write- you have an interesting view, and I enjoy how you show it - 10 from me
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    fred1932 commented on we are the watcher of time

    01-07-2010

    Selena you are off the chain. This is very good also
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    wamomo commented on we are the watcher of time

    01-06-2010

    Great write, selena!...there are some very profound thoughts in this piece! Thank you for sharing it!
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    selena

    01/06/2010

    thank you so much for commenting on my pecie!*^_^* i always love to know what other think of my stuff

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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