depth

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    I want my poetry to be like a bottle of fine wine
    That feeling when you purchase something new
    I want my poetry to have feeling
    I want my thoughts to speak to you
    you to feel my depth
    My words to be that breath you must take
    That sigh when you feel my heartache
    My words to provoke feeling deep in you.
    Really poets know
    through your poetry you want to be seen.


    Can you see me because I see you

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    BeverlyMichaels commented on depth

    12-19-2009

    very nice (note: fine wine is not new it is old-usually) very good

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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