DRY

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    DRY

     YOU HAVE SUCK ALL THE LIFE OUT OF ME

    I GIVE

    YOU TAKE

    YOU ASK

    I BUY

    I AM ENDLESS FAUCET OF WATER RUNNING FROM A SOURCE THAT HAS

    JUST RAN DRY

    I CAN'T QUENCH YOUR THIRST

    I CAN'T SUPPLY YOUR NEED

    NOW IF YOU ARE READING THIS IT MAY SOUND BITTER

    BUT THE INDENIABLE TRUTH

    PEOPLE DRAIN YOU.

    I AM DRY

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    Kingwebstar commented on DRY

    08-10-2012

    This is so real I feel like this sometimes.Very wonderful the way you worded it . Love Da KinG
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    slimgoodwoody commented on DRY

    08-08-2012

    You sound like you have given up. As though you have been walking in the desert for days and you can't take another step! I see you!
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    BeverlyMichaels commented on DRY

    12-19-2009

    I like the honesty in this- this is one I would want to print or save to remind me of the fact since it so often happens to me-i really like- 10!!
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    truth917 commented on DRY

    09-15-2009

    I love that you're straight to the point, and no it doesn't sound bitter. You sound tired of someone taking advantage of you... Nice work
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