OPEN

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    OPEN

    SO I BOUGHT THIS

    I WRAP  IT UP JUST NICE

    I EXAMINE EVERYTHING NOT THINKING TWICE

    ABOUT THE ARRANGEMENT

    I WANT EVERYTHING TO BE TIE

    I WAIT PATIENTLY FOR YOUR APPROACH

    I TRY NOT BE COWARD AND CHOKE

    RED AND BLACK LACE

    YOU OPEN DOOR

    NO WORDS

    SAID

    LISTEN

    THINGS ARE RUNNING THROUGH MY HEAD

     "WILL YOU UNWRAP ME"

    "yesss" that is exactly what he said


     

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    BeverlyMichaels commented on OPEN

    12-19-2009

    I like the idea which reveals itself at the end of you being the present-very clever! I'd vamp up the beginning a bit. Nice

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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