what a fake

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    what a fake

     I Believe you when you said ..........
    I never execpted you to be a fake
    your costume was the perfect disguise
    I never saw you coming
    Until one day I open my eyes
    I realized little by little everything you told me was a lie
    I never took you for a fake
    But I guess I lie to myself
    so unaccepting
    That is me

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    EyesOfRain commented on what a fake

    08-25-2012

    The part where you said "I never took you for a fake, But I guess I lie to myself" blew me away! Sometimes the truth is in front of us but we blindside ourselves. I was with you for every word of this. Great job.
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    Iliketoflyaway

    08/25/2012

    thank u

    Kingwebstar commented on what a fake

    08-10-2012

    Love your work .you are a writer who speaks her mind. Keep writing cause you are doing a wonderful job Love Da KinG
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    BeverlyMichaels commented on what a fake

    12-19-2009

    First line (at first) make me think with ......the next was WHAT he said (but it's what YOU are saying.) the .....confused me. Almost need to put another line (new paragraph.) or leave out the 1st line.
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    keithrberryjr commented on what a fake

    08-13-2009

    This poem is really deep and the reader can tell that there is more to the story behind the poem.Great write
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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