Those beautiful eyes

3 Comments

Tags:
  • Passion

    Those beautiful eyes

    Those beautiful eyes 

    keep looking at me

    Have you ever had someone stare at you so long

    it makes you blush

    tempted to touch

    but never dare

    Those beautiful eyes

    Are they smiling at me?

    Are they look through me?

    Try to find my reflection

    piercing through my soul.

    Your eyes seduce me.

    It makes me lose control

    How can I feel like this from just one look

    sometimes it is all it takes

    One look

    draws you in

    shakes you....

    tempts you....

    reveals you....

    convicts you...

    all because of a glare

    five second stare from those

    beautiful eyes.













    Poem Comments

    (3)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    slimgoodwoody commented on Those beautiful eyes

    08-08-2012

    I have been on the recieving end of a pair of those eyes, the ones that seem to touch your soul and read the very heart of you. That part of you that you would hide if you had the time but the eys prevent that cloak from coming down, has caught the hem of your favorite gown and there you are ass-out! Wish you could pass out but the eyes hold you in a trance, the slightest glance away would mean utter destruction........ enough you have inspired me! Thanks!
    Reply to Comment

    Iliketoflyaway

    08/13/2012

    thank you! you get it

    SinnerSaint commented on Those beautiful eyes

    09-21-2009

    Love how you express every emotion that takes place, not to mention these may have taken place in a matter of seconds even minutes. Wonderfull.
    Reply to Comment

    cottoncandi commented on Those beautiful eyes

    08-21-2009

    I like this i was in the store thw other day and this guy looked and me and all the emotions you are talking a bout i felt them it was almost like love at first sight, Ill probably never see him again but i will remember his eyes and that look.
    Reply to Comment

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

    Iliketoflyaway’s Poems (24)

    Title Comments Submitted
    Title Comments Submitted
    I want to write something 2 01/01/2014
    Writer's Block 1 08/29/2012
    ICE CREAM 1 08/28/2012
    There's a wedding today 3 08/22/2012
    Adrenline Rush 1 08/16/2012
    One word 3 08/16/2012
    poetry 1 08/16/2012
    Romance 4 08/15/2012
    I miss her(don't know what else to say) 3 08/13/2012
    Something Sweet 1 08/13/2012
    Dear azzhole 7 08/13/2012
    A woman prospective 2 08/09/2012
    What the hell 2 08/09/2012
    wore out 3 07/13/2012
    acknowledgeme
    nt    		 1 07/13/2012
    question 1 09/03/2010
    open book 2 10/11/2009
    OPEN 1 09/13/2009
    DRY 4 09/01/2009
    Those beautiful eyes 3 08/16/2009
    yearning 3 08/16/2009
    depth 2 08/14/2009
    I like to fly away 1 08/14/2009
    what a fake 4 08/13/2009
    Top of Page