Devotion

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    Do not dwell on the past, but remember the memories you have of any problem or any person.

    Devotion

    The defintion of devotion
    Is defined by the diction with one's self notion
    In such ardent dedication
    I don't default to withhold in loyalty
    I undoubtedly would'nt treat it unlike royalty
    and it don't be avoidin' me
    just like respect because I got plenty of it
    but what's more inportant
    is keepin' it to myself, which i must'nt
    but when life turns to futility
    the utilities to survive in life
    is your brain and muscle to work fast and hustle
    because the time limit is about a century
    n that's how long you'll struggle
    but definitely for me, I'll be loved in memory
    because being devoted is my motive
    as for the ones with the most respect
    are the respected and their presence
    is never forgotten for eternity
    so the most respected with devotion are alive eternally.

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    ApaqRasgirl commented on Devotion

    07-23-2010

    great write dear friend, more like this and your on the road to a masterpiece poet, your rhyming with the timing of today's society. keep em comin and thanks for asking me to read your work I am thoroughly enjoying it. blessings dear love asha
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    bforibus commented on Devotion

    07-23-2010

    an upbeat point of view from the perspective of a fly on the wall type of poem. great job on it.
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    sk8erpoet commented on Devotion

    07-23-2010

    i love it....i wish i can rhyme like that...cool emotion....great write.....sk8
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    tanmayC commented on Devotion

    06-16-2010

    this is the shit.....dude ur rhymes are awesome!!!
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    AmadeusEx commented on Devotion

    06-16-2010

    seriously fucking epic shit...i cant believe youre only sixteen, this is poetry like its meant to be, i loved it
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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