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    Listen
    As you read, listen...
    Listen to the repitition,
    Also to my diction...
    Listen, no words I'm missin'.

    Listen, to blessins & wishins...
    Anguished from life and what's not right.
    Livin' with my life, I'm driftin.
    As my spirit tries to soar, liftin...

    Always firm for feelin futile...
    Lasting as much as I can
    Always under a trial...
    Lasting as an occupant with triffles in denial.

    Lessons pressin' in my brain
    About good and hostile...
    Lettin' myself gain, meanwhile
    All should listen & learn from another child

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    KING commented on Listen

    06-07-2010

    Nice stuff man,................................... keep up the good work and hustle!
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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