Negative-Positive

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  • Philosophy

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    This one is based on my philosophy on life......basicly everything evens its self out, either on the spot or in time.

    Negative-Positive

    Happy poems are gladly shown,
    as for the mad ones are sad ones.
    The difference between both are brought from the actions we have done.
    For the fact of life none of us can fathom
    and tryin to comprehend it causes much tantrum.
    For this action, is your minds captivity demanding a ransom,
    so ignore, but pay attention to the unknown sequences
    that has past or is yet to come.
    Think positive, not negative, and be appreciative
    as you get your situation situated 'til it's done.
    I know yesterday is history,
    Tomorrow is a mystery,
    and today is a gift,
    for the fact they call it the present,
    I still wish I could be happy
    livin' in the slum with life a bit crappy,
    as all these happenings dramatically pass me irrationally
    I'm sad, surrounded by miracles with my family livin' happily.

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    ApaqRasgirl commented on Negative-Positive

    07-23-2010

    wow, my friend that was one loaded piece, I loved it, they way you used your metaphors to emphasize so many different points of view was terrific. great write dear,10 ++. thanks for sharing love asha

    bforibus commented on Negative-Positive

    07-23-2010

    very inspirational piece. great job on this one. seems to be a bit preachy for my taste but still very good.

    AmadeusEx commented on Negative-Positive

    06-16-2010

    always great flow, life is a gift a present, loved that line

    amithissecret commented on Negative-Positive

    06-15-2010

    a poem that has a clear message. i love it. amazing!!!!!!

    Kukia commented on Negative-Positive

    06-06-2010

    The title was what drew me to this work.Of course I read the prologue and after mediteing a lil on this read and I got.I meen at least in general I felt what the author wanted to convey.A good read.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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