The Day I Die

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    The Day I Die

    The Day I Die
    That'll be the day
    The day my life's pain's away
    The day nothing iz to stay
    But to say
    Fuck death & closed castkets
    So when I'm dead
    Cremate me into ashes
    So that i fly like time
    While flowin like rivers
    With a loss of connection like"miss cum hither"
    As i wither
    Like you're bound to
    Either now or later
    It's gonna come around to you
    So if you dont understand
    And cry with a sigh
    I always wonder why:
    The sky is so blue
    And the soil is true for what it put me through

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    Artie commented on The Day I Die

    06-15-2010

    Nice write- I like your usage of words. 10 from me

    wickedjester commented on The Day I Die

    06-06-2010

    I really like this one I wish I could have had those words at my gpa's funeral it sounded like something he would say

    JayJ420

    06/16/2010

    are you calling me old?

    Metaldoll commented on The Day I Die

    03-03-2009

    ur a young poet, but a great poet. keep on writing, very nice work. read/rate mine plz!!!!

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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