A Strong Rememberence

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    A Strong Rememberence
    To my rememberence
    I know no end to this nonsense
    This nonsense on everyday's basis
    From racist to caught cold caces
    Many faces in so many places
    To hostillity, I'm evasive
    Evadin' those hatin'
    For it's my tracks their tracin'
    Because their still into mistakin'
    But soon they'll be wakin'...
    I'm statin'
    "Better ways are things to potray"
    But when life happens
    It happens anyway...
    Give a care less of what of people say
    For a better day, make way...
    Have no say to nonsense.
    Turn the other way, in patience...
    Do not hasten into persistence, have resistence.
    This is my strongest rememberence

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    amithissecret commented on A Strong Rememberence

    06-15-2010

    i..um...im not really sure how to explain this. all i can say is wow and amazing another great write. im speechless!!!
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    JaleesaSoco commented on A Strong Rememberence

    02-13-2010

    I bet this would sound really dope in spoken word, hearing you recite it. I like your style of poetry. Good job. :)
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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