Done With It All

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  • Lost Love

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    I still like my ex boyfriend, and he sometimes shows that he still likes me, and then other days he doesn't say a word to me. I just want to give up on him, but I know that the next time he puts his arms around me I'll be back in that spiral. I just wish I could forget all these feelings that I have for him. But I know that it'll be hard.

    Done With It All
    I'm done playing this game.
    I'm through with it all.
    I'm giving up and never looking back.
    And if you're wondering why,
    Look in the mirror
    And see the culprit.

    I'm done woundering
    What you feel.
    I'm done asking myself
    Why everytime.
    I'm done with
    All the mixed signals
    You give me everyday.

    I don't know
    If these butterflies
    Will ever fade.
    I don't know
    If you will ever
    Stop making me smile.
    I don't know
    If this feeling
    Will ever go away.

    But I do know
    That I'm done with it all.
    If I still feel these things,
    I will never aknowledge them.
    I will endure them
    Until they pass.
    And when it's all gone,
    And you actually want me back,
    I will laugh and walk away,
    While silently crying
    These tears that don't go away.

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    thedog commented on Done With It All

    12-27-2009

    awaw thats very good powm to read so i do know how you fill so just haing in there it will get beter !!!!!!! from andrew
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