I Fall

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    I Fall
    Againts my will,
    I fall.
    Deeper and deeper
    Into this world,
    I fall.
    I catch glimpses
    Of my surroundings,
    Before I fall
    Deeper and deeper.
    People pass me by
    And I try to hold on.
    But my fingers slip away
    As I fall.
    Not know how long
    This fall will go on,
    I close my eyes
    As I fall 
    Deeper and deeper
    Into this world.
    Wishing for my hand
    To catch hold of anything,
    I fall.
    Againts my will,
    I fall.
    Deeper and deeper
    Into this world,
    I fall.
    I catch glimpses
    Of my surroundings,
    Before I fall
    Deeper and deeper.
    People pass me by
    And I try to hold on.
    But my fingers slip away
    As I fall.
    Not knowing how long
    This fall will go on,
    I close my eyes
    As I fall 
    Deeper and deeper
    Into this world.
    Wishing for my hand
    To catch hold of anything,
    I fall.

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    brandon75926 commented on I Fall

    05-12-2010

    this is really good keep up the good work
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    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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