These Scars

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    These Scars
    All these scars
    Line my arms.
    Just to show
    The pain you caused.
    You don't believe,
    So I pull up my sleeve.
    Can you see?
    These scars represent
    Everything that meant
    The world to me.
    But everything is gone,
    And so are you.
    Can you see the flood?
    The pools and pools
    Of blood.
    All there because
    Of these scars.

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    sher92 commented on These Scars

    06-04-2009

    i rly like this poem i can rly relate to how u feel. u shud go read sum of my poems ud proly like them.
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    AshRenee commented on These Scars

    06-03-2009

    Aw, I'm sorry. I can't exactly relate, but I do feel deep sympathy for you. But you know something? Because you've felt that pain, you'll come away from life stronger than those who haven't encountered that.
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    brandon commented on These Scars

    03-21-2009

    i know what you mean i have over 150 on my left arm
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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