Doubts

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  • Lost Love

    Doubts

     Having doubts
    Is it so?
    Can't help it,
    don't want it this way.
    Should we stop?
    I hope not.
    Don't want to
    maybe we need to....
    Can't stop loving you,
    But I can stop seeing you...

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    BrokenHeart2009 commented on Doubts

    06-03-2011

    I like the way your words flow they rhyme without rhyming, and that is cool.
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    LilliannaFenton

    06/07/2011

    Haha thanks! (: When I write, I write what I feel, and sometimes it rhymes, and sometimes it doesn't. :P I don't really care if it does either way. xP I try to write my emotions and I always hope that someone else will see what I wrote and they'll know that they aren't the only ones dealing with it. :3

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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