Drowning

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    Drowning

    im drowning in the deep, dark waters
    will someone come and save me?
    i keep plunging deeper and deeper
    did anyone even see me?
    i thrash around but i make no wave
    do they notice that im missing?
    everyday seems the same, no light on a sunny day
    if i play along will i surface someday?

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    SWesleyMcgranor commented on Drowning

    02-11-2018

    Those people just want to keep you down. Arise! and walk on water.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

    Dragon’s Poems (19)

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    My confession 1
    How Can I Explain 1
    Finding Of Your True Love 1
    Fading Into Blackness 1
    A Cry for Innocence 2
    Untitled 1
    Time to change 1
    Envy 1
    Crumbling Fantasy 1
    Weakness and Pride 1
    Forever A Child 1
    Lonely Beach 1
    Escaping Reality 1
    Who is "Me" 2
    Drowning 1
    My Inner Beast 3
    First Love 1
    moving forward 1
    Final Blow 2