moving forward

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    moving forward

    Dark emotionless face
    Seems out of place
    Everyone turns to stare
    But you don't even seem to care
    Trapped in your depression
    Making up an accusation
    Your life is over no where to turn
    But deep inside you begin to burn
    Not knowing who to blame
    It's hard to deal with the pain
    Heart empty, mind clear
    You lose all sense of fear
    You push ahead
    Nothing left to dread
    You drop a single tear
    But smile 'cause their love's still here

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    Vincent commented on moving forward

    12-04-2008

    Hi, I liked your poem. critique: no where should be two words, I'm thinking a typo, also last line, does not make sense too me, the poem is about one, not two people. Thumbs up

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