"Dusk"

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    "Dusk"

     

     

     

    This night arrives with elegance…

    Subdues my soul with softness…

    Surreal hues and scents of Earth…

    As dusk moves through the warm sky.

     

    Awareness ever so gently

    Soothes this man’s form and being.

    Brings forth his emotions…

    For all which he holds at this moment.

     

    Geese speak amongst the Pink and Blue…

    Pastels on painted wonder…

    A roar to my heart…

    A smile to this mans soul…

     

    Snow has peered through the fall…

    A glimpse of winter not yet…

    White soft blanket of beauty…

    This night arrives in elegance…

     

    Stephenmichael…

     

    2010…November…

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    carynontherhine commented on "Dusk"

    12-22-2010

    This is very beautiful Stephen. I loved the beginning and the ending. Superbly written. I did not know you were of this kind of talent. Just lovely the way you describe the picture. I loved it. Hugz
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    stephenmichael commented on "Dusk"

    11-12-2010

    Thank you my friends I will be posting more from the site which I call home soon...Again... thank you. Poetsexpressions.ning.com
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    stephenmichael

    04/29/2011

    Thank you for you are a person I would share my softest and most personal poems with...It is a good thing to express a souls unwinding...I love to project my heart into my writing...

    kdarcy commented on "Dusk"

    11-12-2010

    Well done my friend, welcome back ... you have much to offer us, we await your next talented write, be well k
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    arronpalmer commented on "Dusk"

    11-12-2010

    Wowwowwow Mr Michael, what a first poem to come across of yours. I have an enjoyable time to look ahead to as I read my way through your back catalogue on this evidence. This is soft and heartwarming, uplifting almost. The line "Geese speak amongst the pink and blue" is a stunning line, one of the best I have read in some time. I'm glad I've stumbled across you sir.
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    DevinMcNabb commented on "Dusk"

    11-11-2010

    Beautifully written; captures a piece of the wonder and peace of an autumn night.
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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