Enigma

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    Enigma

           Tossed into a sea of nothingness, within my own body. My soul.
    Bright flashes of light; happiness, followed by darkness; hatred of my own self. I grab onto random pieces in my life with frantic desperation, trying to force them to match the holes in myself.
        Why am I so torn? The feeling of my body sliding over hundreds of razors has become a routine, a monster I hate but welcome out of familiarity.


         Tossed into rays of sunshine, welcoming laughter and embraces.
    Wonderful feelings fill my mind and heart as i smile at the people I love.


    I am Whole.
    I am Torn.
    Therein lies the Enigma of Myself.

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    photochick commented on Enigma

    08-09-2009

    wow very very deep you have some great lines in this poem and your talent definitely shines here great work keep it up one thing though make your font bigger lol but i loved the poem
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    optimistic commented on Enigma

    07-28-2009

    Very deep you have a great syle you had me dipping into a puddle of razors for a moment very intense, great write.
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    SilverGirl commented on Enigma

    07-27-2009

    This is a very well written poem. I love your use of metaphores and your wonderful grasp of language.. I am totally impressed with your writing. As for emotions.. also have to commend you. You shouted out your innermost feelings, yet did it in such an elquent manner.. Bravo.. I cannot give this a high enough rating :) Hugs.. SG
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    SilverGirl

    07/27/2009

    *eloquent :D

    WinterFrost commented on Enigma

    07-27-2009

    I like your poetry. emotional teen age angst. There are good lines in the midst of this. You've potential for some talent Winter
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    Phoenix9 commented on Enigma

    07-23-2009

    touched by light, God rays seem to embrace you, yet the pieces of the puzzle need to be placed in the right order, too became a whole, and untorn, great write
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