Eternity

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  • Dark Poetry

    Eternity
    time has past
    not far enough
    the sickening silence
    gots me weak not tough

    why oh why
    is life so short
    get a little life
    but not more

    soon it will be
    like u were never born
    and no one will care
    not anymore

    cuz your life was shit
    and such a waste
    u didn’t care for no one
    not a single day

    so who do you blame
    for such tragedy
    oh what no one cared either
    though you begged god please

    well welcome to hell
    eternity
    enjoy your time
    fucking sleaze

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    muttman1 commented on Eternity

    01-06-2009

    whoa that was deep
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    loveless24

    06/06/2009

    actually unless your sarcastic it's not that deep, its kind of a shitty little thing, I had not read it for a while but it is not just like negative it like pushes negativity on other people, i must of been pissed when i wrote it, thank you for the support very much

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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