Everything I Do

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This is the first rhyming poem that I made, that I am actually proud of :)

Everything I Do

Everything I do
Is leading me back to you
I wonder how we could be
If you had true feelings for me

Could just find me here?
Because it's not clear
That I have found someone
And you're not just anyone

You're the best guy
Sigh, cry, lie
Just don't say goodbye

Please, leave me here
Because I can't see your tear
When I look in the mirror
I want to see the fear
In your eyes
As we say our goodbyes

For the last time
I'll tell you I'm
The one for you
And that is true...

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The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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