The Snow Outside

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    Poem Commentary

    Comparing things that can be alike, but you usually dont think are alike

    The Snow Outside

    The Snow outside is piling in
    It gets colder and colder outside
    And in my heart
    Why can't it stop?
    It's been months
    Since I've felt the warmth
    Of summer

    Staying inside
    And feeling alone
    No one's there
    Should I take the risk
    Of going outside
    And risking my life
    Because of the cold, hard snow
    And the cold, hard truth

    Being in love is like snow
    Cold, cold, cold
    And bitter
    Warmth is what I need...
    Warmth is what I need...

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    jerseycrtz commented on The Snow Outside

    02-15-2010

    I am! That was AWESOME! I can't believe you didn't know how awesome you are at poetry!

    LizaT11

    02/16/2010

    Lol thanks!

    jerseycrtz commented on The Snow Outside

    02-15-2010

    Holy Chiz! This poem is awesome! I absolutely love it! You go girl!

    LizaT11

    02/15/2010

    You know you can tell me the truth, right? Lol

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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