Fall

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    Poem Commentary

    This is a sensory poem I wrote it about what i wanted most at the moment. I wrote it using my most treasured memories

    Fall

    Fall is knocking on my door

    I see pumpkinz bright and shiny

    The air smells sweet and weightless

    Sipping hot chocolate

    I feel Warm by the fire

    My mother holding me in her arms

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    Teardrops commented on Fall

    02-06-2011

    She still holds you as my husband still kisses me on the the wind Marie
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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