Twin Towers

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This was originally a school project but i was inspired to think deeply about it and express my toughs. I could feel the emotion in it so i wanted to see what you think of it.

Twin Towers

Tumbling down before me

Washing away thousands

Injuring hundreds of others

Navigating it's way to history


Tearing through my heart

Oh how I wish it didn't happen

Wow I'm still in shock

Every day I remember the loses

Remember the day

Sounds of siren's and screaming

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FranzJ commented on Twin Towers

02-06-2011

so much feeling and emtion for someone so young - never forget what happened

Teardrops commented on Twin Towers

02-06-2011

Well written heartfelt and truly a young talented person here loved the read Marie

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