Grades

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    I came home with my report card and my mom used the word i hate the most she said she was disappointed and I feel really bad so I wrote about how I felt.

    Grades

    I hate that feeling, it was such a good day...

    I hate that look, it was so dissapointed...

    I hate that paper, it was so hurtful...

    I hate those numbers, it was so pittiful.

     

    I hate these tears, there so heavy...

    I hate these lies, there so deceiving...

    I hate these words, there so peircing...

    I hate these moments, there so lonely.

     

    I hate my self, I let it happen...

    I hate my friends, I let them cheer me up...

    I hate my family, I let them break me down...

    I hate my mind, I let it run free.

     

    I hate my grades......a 73, 84, 86, 91, 94, 95 i did really bad and thats not a lie.

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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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