Tremble

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This is based off of some thing that actual happened to me in my life.

Tremble

My heart began to slip

My eyes water

I fall to my knee's

Weeping the words...Why Mom, why

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Teardrops commented on Tremble

02-06-2011

You cant pay for others mistakes look to your future Marie

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

AlisRed’s Poems (26)

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Forgiveness 1
Lifeless 2
To Live 2
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Darkest Dwelling~ 0
If a pig could fly~ 0
Tell me why~ 0
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If I die... 1
Evaporation~ 0
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Future 0
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Fall 1
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Come Out Shadow 1
Light Fade 1
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Any Happiness 1
Life 1