Feeling Odd in a World Where I Dont Belong

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    Feeling Odd in a World Where I Dont Belong

    Like opening a closed door,
    To find nothing in the room.
    Walking into the room with hope,
    To look around and see an apparition.
    I walk to this ghostly wonder and reach,
    All of a sudden it as anything worth my time does…disappear.
    I look at this and wonder what has happened to me,
    All I can do is sit and listen to everyone vanish.
    From sitting on my own to finding to walking with a beauty,
    To walking as the only guy in a crowd of the opposing sex.
    As I walk I wonder why???
    What did I do to see myself surrounded by this anomaly???
    I think that one day it will fall into a pattern
    A pattern that I like but abhor at the same time…
    From now till the day I pass that final gate,
    I see this being the same till I die…

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    cdeluhery87 commented on Feeling Odd in a World Where I Dont Belong

    09-17-2009

    nicely written looking forward to reading more of your work

    tink0413 commented on Feeling Odd in a World Where I Dont Belong

    09-14-2009

    I really liked the poem it spoke to me. Very good.

    ELRey commented on Feeling Odd in a World Where I Dont Belong

    05-04-2009

    Wonderfull imagry. I esp liked "All I can do is sit and listen to everyone vanish." I have a feeling you can polish this up a bit more if you desire.

    PunoAngulus commented on Feeling Odd in a World Where I Dont Belong

    02-05-2009

    Great poem. that feeling about just observing the world and being the guy in the crowd. Wonderful. Thank you for sharing

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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