Figment

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    • is in a fairly crappy mood. Too many bums. Doesn't that tell you something?

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    If it doesn't seem to make sense to you, it is possible you are not catching the same sensation I did.
    It is mainly about a woman, who, does not exist.
    Loving a man, who, does not exist.
    Both, making excuses of lies and hate.
    But, in the end,
    It is just the woman's imagination.
    Maybe her conscience trying to tell her something?
    Hm.

    Figment

    Finally, I break free from your clutches.
    It's been so long, I've forgotten what the outside world looks like.
    I run towards the door.
    Almost there!
    Almost free!
    But your hands wrap around my fragile ankle.
    I am pulled back in once again.
    You bastard! Let me go!
    You hate, and sink down to my level.
    Hate, hate, hate.
    That is all you can possibly do.
    You have no beating pulse.
    No smile of love through your grin.
    Your voice cracks, and through your teeth,
    you say, " love you."
    And now I know why I have stayed.
    A figment of my imagination.

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    gothgirl1218 commented on Figment

    06-09-2009

    i totally no what you mean i like it is how you say intersting and some people can relate to it keep up the good work
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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