The Syndrome

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  • My Feelings
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  • Truth
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  • The World
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  • War
    • DominatePeace
    • is in a fairly crappy mood. Too many bums. Doesn't that tell you something?

    Poem Commentary

    This piece has to do with war,
    and the way it practically poisons your mind. The fighting and the violence is too much for people to handle.
    It never stops, and its meanings spread like a disease.

    The Syndrome

     This Syndrome...
    This bad case of violence with a hint of hatred.
    The smell of gunpowder, strangling and stealing each breathe I take.
    It feels like World War Three.
    Death looms in every hall.
    Terror lingers, hoping to kill us all.
    This Syndrome...
    It's ruthless.
    It tricks the innocent.
    It brings you into its trap,
    And promises to let you out.
    The changing outside is such a risk.
    This Syndrome...
    This lifeless life stealer.
    This war toy.
    It will not be put to a stop.
    This Syndrome...

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    passionsdance commented on The Syndrome

    06-09-2009

    A very well worded poem for such a young artist . I like how you depict today's rancor as a syndrome ... good work !!!
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    gothgirl1218 commented on The Syndrome

    06-09-2009

    wow thats very intereting it is good i thinks its better then mine and yet i no wat u mean wen u say it feels like a world war three
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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