great light

1 Comments

Tags:
  • Emotional
    • arpee
    • ..thanks guys for comments and ratings!

    great light

     i'm on a train,
    slow moving to take away my pain.
    he says,'i'm in a limbo right now',
    getting to the light i don't know how.
    it's raining hard out here,
    so does my feelings i won't share.
    your father won't let you down son,
    like my father did to some.
    sometimes we have to do,
    what we had to do.
    we'll be together soon son,
    follow me and i lead you to the sun.
    between tears lies happiness,
    beyond darkness we will notice..
    great light! great light! great light!
    inside this tunnel that made us fright.

    arpee'05 

    Poem Comments

    (1)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    am2anangel commented on great light

    02-23-2011

    interesting write very visual and thought provoking. well done. -Tonya
    Reply to Comment

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    arpee’s Poems (46)

    Title Comments Submitted
    Title Comments Submitted
    happy 1st anniversary 1 04/18/2011
    memory 0 04/18/2011
    hands that rack the cradle 0 04/18/2011
    one 1 04/18/2011
    my text girl 1 04/18/2011
    i was 1 04/18/2011
    count your blessing 0 04/18/2011
    secrets of life 1 03/19/2011
    friend in flask 0 03/15/2011
    great light 1 02/19/2011
    arpee 1 02/19/2011
    homesick 1 02/19/2011
    friction 0 02/19/2011
    nursing home 0 02/19/2011
    faithless 1 01/29/2011
    beast of burden 0 01/29/2011
    my forever joy 2 01/29/2011
    qoutes 0 01/29/2011
    myron (r.i.p.) 0 01/29/2011
    love is free 1 01/29/2011
    jaded love 0 01/29/2011
    inspired 0 08/18/2010
    i'll be back 0 06/28/2010
    jvkx hy xlhmxkbv 0 06/28/2010
    my faith 0 06/28/2010
    life 0 06/28/2010
    down to core 0 06/28/2010
    my sol 0 06/28/2010
    telltale of a maze 0 06/28/2010
    sleeping beauty 0 06/28/2010
    my faith 0 06/27/2010
    scarecrow 1 06/27/2010
    "where is juliet?" 0 06/21/2010
    unwanted 0 08/12/2009
    one day at a time 1 08/09/2009
    questions 1 08/09/2009
    the goal 0 08/09/2009
    fear of the unknown 0 08/09/2009
    six strings 0 08/09/2009
    count your blessing 1 08/09/2009
    better 0 08/09/2009
    mary 0 08/09/2009
    elements -3 05/10/2009
    my son 0 05/10/2009
    wifezilla 0 05/10/2009
    original poetry dot com 0 05/09/2009
    Top of Page