Guy Stealer

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    Guy Stealer

     I had him first
    I told you
    I guess that was my mistake
    Because now you like him
    I stand no chance
    We are going to meet a new guy
    I need a boyfriend
    If he meets you
    Then he won't go out with me
    He will choose you
    Not me
    I stand no chance
    You stealer
    You steal all of them
    I love you like a sister
    But you are a stealer
    A guy stealer

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    Chaos128 commented on Guy Stealer

    09-16-2010

    I like your poem a lot and I feel ya, frustration, babygirl4028. But if the character in your poem goes out with the attitude that she stands no chance, whose fault is it really she ain't pullin' no love? She's already defeated herself before she's left the house.
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    babygirl4028

    09/20/2010

    thank you. i was really mad cuz it is true and all of it is true. i was tired of it and told her but she don't listen.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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