I Love You Under a Rainbow

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    I Love You Under a Rainbow
    My love is never fading, even as the years come and go
    When I called to say I Love You , I was standing under a rainbow
    The skies were grey and it was raining all around
    A beam of light revieled something so profound
    The colors were bright , such a beautiful site to see
    In that instant I thought of you, I hope you think of me
    After all this time together, I just wanted you to know
    That I love you my dear, I love you under a rainbow

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    Stryx commented on I Love You Under a Rainbow

    10-20-2009

    You have the rhyme, now work on the rhythm. You have a lot of possibility, but you have to work at it. That's callled rewrite.
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    stellar commented on I Love You Under a Rainbow

    10-19-2009

    VEry very romantic....this poem melts my heart..........^_^ v
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    hartpickle10 commented on I Love You Under a Rainbow

    06-30-2009

    wow, that was realy sweet, i was wondering if i could borrow it 4 a song?
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    Johnny

    06/30/2009

    Thanks so very much, and sure, feel free to use it, thats cool.

    tinygirl commented on I Love You Under a Rainbow

    01-12-2009

    very beautiful poem johnny
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    litldeer commented on I Love You Under a Rainbow

    11-18-2008

    I really wanted to change the score on this to a 9, but it wouldn't let me. This is absolutely beautiful. Keep writing
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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