I Love You

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    Basically i made made a bet that i couldnt write a good song with the title, "I love you". Lets just say i won that bet. lol.

    I Love You

     Its no secret dear
    No point in hiding dear
    I love you
    And you know its true
    I love you
    Darling, I need you

    Yes it's a fact dear
    Theres no denying it dear
    I love you
    Oh only if you knew
    I love you
    Darling, you make me feel anew

    Darling dont you know, that without you
    We cannot make two?
    But please hear me out dear
    I need you with me here
    Cause darling, i love you

    Yes its the truth dear
    No shrouding it dear
    I love you
    And ill be here for you
    I love you
    Forever through and through

    Darling dont you know, that without you
    We cannot make two?
    But please hear me out dear
    I need you with me here
    Cause darling, i love you

    Darling dont you know if you dont stay
    Youll leave my heart in dismay
    So lets take a chance dear
    Cant you see? Its so clear
    That darling, i love you
    I love you

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    Pat007 commented on I Love You

    06-22-2009

    Very good fgodfather. All you need now is music. Something slow and romantic; a ballet even. Great job
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    Sydney commented on I Love You

    06-20-2009

    wow. this song is really good. wow. i cant stop wowwing this poem.
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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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