I Love You

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    Basically i made made a bet that i couldnt write a good song with the title, "I love you". Lets just say i won that bet. lol.

    I Love You

     Its no secret dear
    No point in hiding dear
    I love you
    And you know its true
    I love you
    Darling, I need you

    Yes it's a fact dear
    Theres no denying it dear
    I love you
    Oh only if you knew
    I love you
    Darling, you make me feel anew

    Darling dont you know, that without you
    We cannot make two?
    But please hear me out dear
    I need you with me here
    Cause darling, i love you

    Yes its the truth dear
    No shrouding it dear
    I love you
    And ill be here for you
    I love you
    Forever through and through

    Darling dont you know, that without you
    We cannot make two?
    But please hear me out dear
    I need you with me here
    Cause darling, i love you

    Darling dont you know if you dont stay
    Youll leave my heart in dismay
    So lets take a chance dear
    Cant you see? Its so clear
    That darling, i love you
    I love you

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    Pat007 commented on I Love You

    06-22-2009

    Very good fgodfather. All you need now is music. Something slow and romantic; a ballet even. Great job
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    Sydney commented on I Love You

    06-20-2009

    wow. this song is really good. wow. i cant stop wowwing this poem.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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