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    Yes

    If i asked you, would you say yes?
    Or would you turn me away?
    It's not easy i must confess
    To say what i want to say

    If i asked you, would you say yes?
    Or would you look the other way?
    These feelings i cant supress
    They get stronger everyday

    If i told you the things i feel
    You may think of them as unreal
    But I tell you they can't be concealed
    And it seems so very surreal
    That my heart, only you can steal

    If i asked you, would you say yes?
    Or would you turn me away?
    I'll wait for you, but till that day nonetheless
    True to you I will stay

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    chinablack commented on Yes

    06-19-2009

    Very nice 88. I hope whomever she may be she says yes. Let her read this... and she will definetely say yes.. I enjoyed reading your poetry.

    godfatherguy88

    06/19/2009

    thanks so much china! i really appreciate your feedback! peace and love!

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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