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    Yes

    If i asked you, would you say yes?
    Or would you turn me away?
    It's not easy i must confess
    To say what i want to say

    If i asked you, would you say yes?
    Or would you look the other way?
    These feelings i cant supress
    They get stronger everyday

    If i told you the things i feel
    You may think of them as unreal
    But I tell you they can't be concealed
    And it seems so very surreal
    That my heart, only you can steal

    If i asked you, would you say yes?
    Or would you turn me away?
    I'll wait for you, but till that day nonetheless
    True to you I will stay

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    chinablack commented on Yes

    06-19-2009

    Very nice 88. I hope whomever she may be she says yes. Let her read this... and she will definetely say yes.. I enjoyed reading your poetry.

    godfatherguy88

    06/19/2009

    thanks so much china! i really appreciate your feedback! peace and love!

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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