Living In Black And White

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    Living In Black And White

     The grassy fields and all the trees
    Have all lost their shade of green
    And everything that i see
    Is black and white

    In rainbows the colors fade
    Replaced by a darker shade
    Every where I look im living
    In black and white
    In black and white

    I look at the ocean blue
    But the semblance of the tide has subdued
    Still all around me
    Is black and white
    Is black and white

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    cmlestrade commented on Living In Black And White

    07-29-2009

    Lots of raw emotion in this one. Sadness expressed in such a subtle fashion. Short and to the point. very nice.
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    scrye commented on Living In Black And White

    06-18-2009

    I like the double line use at the end it really gets what your trying to say out there. We can only appreciate the miracle of a sunrise if we have waited in darkness. Experience life, ALL of it for it makes us what we are. I really liked this. Keep writing.
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    sundanceatnight commented on Living In Black And White

    06-18-2009

    It seems like everything revolves around one thing. I understand that or at least what I think you are writing about and if I am right. I understand and agree,,,,,short poem but big in understanding.....good job
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    godfatherguy88

    06/18/2009

    thank you so much. and youre right in a way. mainly its just about drpression. And everything around you being wrong/colorless

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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