In Your Mind

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    This goes out to all the poets! Thanks for sharing your dreams.

    In Your Mind

    In your mind I have found hell,
    cold and lonely.

    In your mind I have found myself
    neglecting my household for
    the time spent mesmerized
    by your raw talent.

    In your mind I have felt loss,
    but have gained a lot!

    In your mind I have found peace,
    yet lost sleep.

    In your mind I have found naughty affairs.

    In your mind I have found happiness.

    In your mind I have found a resting place,
    for my thoughts as well as yours!

    In your mind, you have found me!
     
                                            By Keith L. Smith

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    Insideme commented on In Your Mind

    03-22-2010

    I really like this one, how often ive neglected my mental household for the sake of another.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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