Instant Satisfaction!

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  • Sadness

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    Also at the time when I wasn't myself. I still love looking back at my poem book to see how much I have changed.

    Instant Satisfaction!

     Sit and wait.
    It's half past eight...
    Alone and lost in my thoughts...
    All of the pain you brought.
    I was so naive...
    All those chances I had to leave.
    Nothing left for me here.
    All those nights of fear.
    They disappear with one action.
    Instant Satisfaction.
    I take the pill container...
    I can stay here no longer!
    An overdose to end it all!
    Or a BIG FALL!
    Either or...
    I am here no more!

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    Whiteheart commented on Instant Satisfaction!

    07-03-2009

    acroos the atlantics, a star awaits for you with a BIG HUG full of warmth to keep you Tall not to let you fall.to quench your hunger with instant satistaction,only if you belive in the you in you, to stay away form distraction and give 'em no releverance... you'll need your pill of container no longer..then you will see Whiteheart LIKES you BETTER..
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