Is It?

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  • Passion

    Is It?
    Words words words
    Are a chore of a charm
    Crafting alliteration for your entertainment
    Muddying the myriad of my pure intentions
    Are words caste with weight
    Where lighted lures and hooks drag
    Exotic bait
    for weird fishes
    To take,
    to kill, with ritual dagger, to eat

    IT
    IS

    The dancing, It is threads, It is glances
    It is our fleeting stances
    It Is
    The resin in my bowl
    It Is
    The cigarettes in hand and ashtray
    It Is
    Words hallowed from once hollowed happenings
    It Is
    The mundane made profound- by the- sound- of my- mouth
    IT IS
    The nonsense of my jargon, not quite obvious as sarcasm, it is (lulz)
    It Is falling so long it feels like flying
    It Is revelation, surrender
    It Is mental altars to honor celestials
    It Is good and bad so why bother it's balanced

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    Hiporlacking commented on Is It?

    03-07-2010

    There is a lot of imagery here. I like how you acknowledge that a lot of the things you say are nonsensical. Put me at ease. I didn't feel so bad for not getting "It"
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    avengingangel commented on Is It?

    06-04-2009

    very cool llllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
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    Illuminato commented on Is It?

    06-04-2009

    Passion drives your forth to write beyond the normal flow Deep your insights, upon human pathway of mortal strife Greater is your ability to transcend, mundane of woe Bravo! - Your muses varied - Etched with passion's knife ~*~ Mir!
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    Swann commented on Is It?

    06-04-2009

    Very good poem, I loved your flow and word choice. It is, was a great two words to build around, it is can mean so much, whatever you want it to.
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    MikeSiZaChrist

    06/04/2009

    to me it= matter; is= time

    Writer1 commented on Is It?

    06-03-2009

    Ok, I'm HOOKED! Glad you recommended reading this one first (still haven't gotten to the others), but THIS was blew me away. Awesome writing, and it resonated. Very nice.
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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