Jay

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    Jay

    I miss you the last moments were
    trashed moments
    Because I lacked the ability to retain
    or decipher
    his screaming words ancient as a bible
    I'm cold,I'm stifled,
    My love couldn't melt the rifle
    I'd melt the rifle
    you'd still feel the way you felt
    I couldn't melt the........
    JAY WHERE EVER YOU WENT
    I'M BENT FOREVER
    MY SOUL LOVES YOU,BY TERRIBLE DEFAULT
    IT WASN'T ENOUGH
    Anderia Prescilla Felder
    Copyright ©2009 Anderia Prescilla Felder

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    FiloRozzell commented on Jay

    04-22-2009

    Don't worry babe if it gonna come or go let it. Nice expression....
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    Drivingczar commented on Jay

    04-17-2009

    No hesitation verses! Strong emotions! Great write!
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    mistyparish commented on Jay

    04-16-2009

    This is touching. I definetly relate to the pain of someone close taking there own life and feeling guilty. You blame yourself but, in the end there is nothing that we could have done. Maybe prolonged it a little but, I think eventually they would have fell back into the depression.
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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