ViTaL

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    ViTaL

    I invoke thee to come
    come from the hills the
    burst and form the mountains

    Bring unto to me
    structure of unsurpassable
    power bring to me the Lady
    of the hour

    Wash, wash her skin
    flesh and bone
    don't bring her to me
    sour

    Or don't touch her at all
    let mother earth bring
    forth a shower

    Spill ,splash, crash with
    waves and waves against my
    chest cavity down into the
    uterus of life

    Let's co-discover
    that thick sticky....
    Plasma's long lost
    brother

    JOLT LIFE INTO
    ME snatch me!
    From my head to my
    thighs to my knees, feet
    and toes..........OOOOO
    OHHHHH!AHHH ALL OF LIFE
    IS OBSLETE, INCOMPLETE,NO REPEAT,WE WILL RETREAT,
    THERE WILL BE DEFEAT.....without you there is no me..
    I'll die if you don't........heated with flames of vitality, blood penetrate and permeate me
    so I can scream!



    FLOW!!!!!!!!!!!



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    wildpendigus commented on ViTaL

    07-03-2009

    Very poetic good and unique, the more you write the better you get it's very different it shows a lot of talent and creativity everyone doesn't have what you have it's a gift from above and it makes you stand out! Good Luck! grecowong@yahoo.com

    BRAINCELL commented on ViTaL

    03-27-2009

    THAT WAS DEEP YET BEAYTIFUL KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND GOD BLESS

    Drivingczar commented on ViTaL

    03-27-2009

    Your passionate verses come from within your full passionate existence! Live on!

    mistyparish commented on ViTaL

    03-23-2009

    I really like this fennesse. Keep them coming.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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