take me (wind of opportunity)

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take me (wind of opportunity)

I'm still... I don't want to be
lift me bend me form me
rinse me shift me like an
underground earth plate
shake me shake me
vibrate energy into me
unearth my quake
the pungent smell of patience
awaits so strong it's tangible
destiny, girl your My clay I'm(woman)designed to create
I'll race a steady pace
just to wait after brutally learning
searching for the gate.... look past
the mountains,pollinated with her seeds
it's fennesse...........is that? I never thought she'd be! touching skin with ,caressing and holding hands with....insatiably in love with opportunity.Dig that she's finally free

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kdavidscott1 commented on take me (wind of opportunity)

06-27-2009

This is a very good poem fennesse - they better take advantage of the opportunity given...smile KD

mistyparish commented on take me (wind of opportunity)

04-16-2009

You are very good. I like this. I like all your work.

Drivingczar commented on take me (wind of opportunity)

03-27-2009

Your feminism is a thing of beauty!

streetprophit11 commented on take me (wind of opportunity)

03-21-2009

this poem is real ... whats the word .... beautiful you have great sense of words and great rythym.

Likkwidred1 commented on take me (wind of opportunity)

03-20-2009

it's very erotic. I can envision it

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

fennesse’s Poems (8)

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Water II 2
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We don't care(right now 10
Jay 4
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take me (wind of opportunity) 8
ISM 5
Jay 12