take me (wind of opportunity)

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    take me (wind of opportunity)
    I'm still... I don't want to be
    lift me bend me form me
    rinse me shift me like an
    underground earth plate
    shake me shake me
    vibrate energy into me
    unearth my quake
    the pungent smell of patience
    awaits so strong it's tangible
    destiny, girl your My clay I'm(woman)designed to create
    I'll race a steady pace
    just to wait after brutally learning
    searching for the gate.... look past
    the mountains,pollinated with her seeds
    it's fennesse...........is that? I never thought she'd be! touching skin with ,caressing and holding hands with....insatiably in love with opportunity.Dig that she's finally free

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    kdavidscott1 commented on take me (wind of opportunity)

    06-27-2009

    This is a very good poem fennesse - they better take advantage of the opportunity given...smile KD
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    mistyparish commented on take me (wind of opportunity)

    04-16-2009

    You are very good. I like this. I like all your work.
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    Drivingczar commented on take me (wind of opportunity)

    03-27-2009

    Your feminism is a thing of beauty!
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    streetprophit11 commented on take me (wind of opportunity)

    03-21-2009

    this poem is real ... whats the word .... beautiful you have great sense of words and great rythym.
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    Likkwidred1 commented on take me (wind of opportunity)

    03-20-2009

    it's very erotic. I can envision it
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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