Letting Go

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    Letting Go

    It hurts so bad
    I can not breathe,
    please tell me that
    it's all a dream.
    That you didn't say
    you can't do it anymore,
    you didn't ask me to turn
    and walk out the door.
    To walk out on this love
    and all that we've made,
    tell me my love
    why are you afraid?
    Why must we do this
    again and again,
    can we please compromise
    and both of us win?
    Inside I'm empty
    my stomach keeps turning,
    my heart and my soul
    and my body are yearning.
    To hold you again
    smell the scent of your skin,
    to be wrapped in your warmth,
    to feel you with in.
    No I can't do it,
    I've got to be strong,
    this pain and confusion
    has gone on too long.
    I'll no longer do this
    I will not be wronged,
    It's time to let go,
    It's time to move on.

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    frankson03 commented on Letting Go

    06-18-2009

    helll yeah,, i like that. that bf/gf stuff always ends up like that for sum reason. you dont realize what chu got, unitl its gone.. that is one the truest statment.. either thats your dude. or there is sumbody much better for you. that will make you smile 90percent of the time.. be easy slim. great poem, nice way to express yourself..

    Chrisjan commented on Letting Go

    05-29-2009

    You have a very creative writting talent. One can feel your heart + soul being poured out in this poem, that forms a story. Thank you for sharing.

    keithrberryjr commented on Letting Go

    01-15-2009

    very nice poem

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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