life

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    i wrote this while i was thinking back on how many people i've lost and these few stuck out the most, and i decided to write about life and how we shouldnt be shrunken into shells, and how we shuld just live out loud

    life

    Life is short,

    So live it long.

    Live it to the fullest capacity,

    Have fun,

    Don't be shy,

    Live full,

    Be the preson you want to be,

    Like i said life is short,

    Live it long,

    I've found out the hard way,

    many times...

    But only few stick out the most..

    My cousin died of cancer only at 18 months, yet it only happened 14 years ago, it still sticks to me like glue.

    and a year ago i lost a neighbor to a tragic horror, she was killed by a teen texting while he was driving, even to this day it feels like a living nightmare.

    and just recently i lost my love, i lost him to be my protector. He went to fight the war for america, and he never returned.

    So like i said,

    Life is short,

    So live it long.

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    tierra7 commented on life

    07-28-2009

    wonderful! you are ever so right..life is terribly short, we think we have for ever...but we never really know..Gr8 write..T-7
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    twilightchick

    07/30/2009

    thank you

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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